From the feedback I got from the crit I found that I needed to touch up the letters on the 'Shake it' poster to make a more formed letter. The type face made out of lipmarks seems to work quite strongly and is more readable.
What was also mentioned is that the neon legs overlapping each other looks really good but a little messy due to the shapes not all joining together so I need to look at this to join these together to mimic neon bulbs and simplify it a bit more.
Another suggestion was that I could look at doing a simple animation with the shake it design where it could be used as a TV ad or an online ad.
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